near CR-Sport Complex
Rob-wiang Sub-District,
Muang District, Ciangrai
Thailand 57000
5/8/2010
Dear Tasnim.Hi! Tasnim , How are you doing? I really hope you are always fine. No see you long time , I'm quit busy last period. Are you still in University or you are working now? anyway hope you work hard. And now I'm trying to study hard too. I would like to join the university in India.
Do you still like Korean Boy Band named Super Junior? I heard many problem of the member, it's not a good news. Anyway do not worry too much. I believe they can trough this bad time, Fighting ! but I still love TVXQ even though now they're broke down T^T.
Thailand now not good at all because of trouble of Thai political and etc. So what about Palestine? Is it going ok taday? Well, I hope it better than the past. But in this situation your does your father's business going good? Anyway I hope it always good.
Global warming drive me crazy everyday! I hate whatever that changed too fast, such as morning is very cold then afternoon it's damn hot finally it's rain in the evening and going to cold again in the night. Very crazy season in one day ! T^T
OK! I think I already told you news about me so I hope you will send me back as fast as you readit. Last time you invited me to visit you at Palestine, well I hope to go too if I have a chance. I also always welcome you to Thailand. And when you come to Thailand do not forget to cantact me. I'm always looking forward to our re-union.
Love,
Your best friend, Seoul.
Your best friend, Seoul.
Hi Seoul, Firstly thanks for the letter. It was quite interesting to read your letter. The format is right and most of the letter too. I hope you keep it up. However there are small corrections to be made. It is as follows:-
ReplyDelete1.(you wrote)No see you long time , I'm quit busy last period.
Right- NOT SEEN you IN A long time, I HAVE BEEN QUITE busy LATELY.
2.(You wrote)I heard many problem of the member,
Right- I heard many problem of the MEMBERS
3.(You wrote) but I still love TVXQ even though now they're broke down T^T.
RIGHT- but I still love TVXQ even though now THEY HAVE BROKEN down TO T^T.
4. (You wrote) So what about Palestine? Is it going ok taday? Well, I hope it better than the past.
RIGHT- So what about Palestine? Is it going ok ? Well, I hope it IS better than the past.
5. (You Wrote) But in this situation your does your father's business going good?
Right- But in this situation HOW IS YOUR FATHER'S BUSINESS GOING?
6. (You Wrote) Global warming drive me crazy everyday! I hate whatever that changed too fast, such as morning is very cold then afternoon it's damn hot finally it's rain in the evening and going to cold again in the night.
RIGHT- Global warming DRIVES me crazy everyday! I hate whatever that CHANGES too fast, such as morning is very cold then afternoon it's damn hot finally it's RAINS in the evening and IT IS going to BE cold again in the night.
That's about it. Do read it once. IF there is any questions blog back to me, I would be happy to answer them. See you next week. Keep smiling. Peace Out.